”5 years of pain
15 years of suffering
20 year old privilege
And you think you know something about hatred ?? ”
I can‘t let you live your life in awaiting forgiveness
Cause my vengeance is so loud
Even if you try to confess the sins that shines through your skin
I will still watch you fall to the ground
I will hear the words that comes out of your throat
And I will pretend that I feel you somehow
And laugh with the agony inside of my heart
slow and barbaric death of yours would satisfy me
Forgive you ?? Nah it would only purify me
Even if you are forgiven by lord
Your death would remind him of the mistake that he did before
And never let his pride pushed through his faith again
The things you did to me left the scar on my soul
The cursed disease that you spread inside me
Became my cure
And iam now dancing in darkness
Raising a tost to your defeat
Won’t you forgive me
Consider it done , I want to hear it from you
See through my eyes the life of BETRAYAL
Don’t you pity me ?
Now I had raised the sails…
Straight to horizon to the garden of dream
And I can still hear you scream
Save your strength , the struggle is worthless
When the vengeance is too loud
The heartbeats fades away slowly
So let go of your pride
Turn the page it’s the end of the story ……
The hell awaits
Superb poetry. Thank you for the follow and it’s good to meet you.
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Thanks alot …. 🙂 it’s nice to meet you too
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😀
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Wow iam stunned … Thanks for everything …
I am glad that you enjoyed it …
Thanks for sharing my poem …
Keep in touch 🙂
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Forgive me Grimms!
I have been skipping out on Flashback Friday’s these last few weeks and I apologize. However today’s Flashback will make it up to you tenfold. Today’s post comes from a blogger that I have only recently discovered.
DarsaPoetry recently followed me and thank heavens for that or I may never have discovered such a talented writer. So today I’ll be showcasing DarsaPoetry’s poem “The Warrior’s revenge” one of the first poems I had the pleasure of reading.
This isn’t much of a “Flashback” exactly, since it was published on December 2nd but I’m sure many of you may be unaware of this talented artist so it certainly deserves a reblog in my opinion.
If you (like me) are a huge fan of written word you are not only going to enjoy this poetry but you will want to check out the rest of DarsaPoetry’s work. I’m in love with the vibe of the poetry pieces I have read so far. They remind me of Grimm fairy tales and Edgar Allen Poe. Which as many of you all ready know are some of my favorite things to read.
You know I love anime and you know I love makeup but this weekend I plan on kicking back and diving into Darsapoetry’s work. I hope you will all join me!
Don’t forget to stop by Darsapoetry’s site (by clicking on the name)!
Happy Weekend!
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Thanks a lot for feeling my poem … Glad you crossed my way
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I am so glad I was able to find your work. You are very talented and I love the vibe and pictures you are able to create with your words. I hope it is okay but I do this thing on my site where I showcase work by other bloggers (I always link back and credit the original source) this week I decided to use this piece. I was just floored by the imagery of your words. Any I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Thanks alot for sharing my poem … I appreciate it … Thats very kind of you keep up the good work 😉
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No problem 😀 I love sharing and building the blogging community and I was really glad to come across your work.
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Thanks again 🙂
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This reminds me of the ballads written by W B Yeats! I love this!
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Appreciate it ..I am glad that you like it 🙂
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Wow! Emotions were amazingly portrayed here!! That was intense!
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Thanks 🙂 glad you liked it
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I don’t know the first thing about rage, but something about your poem clicked something into place. I guess somedays you have to let the warrior live on!
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Well Thank you 🙂
😀 ….
Will you help me to pick words … To rhyme ??
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I am honored to! Although I’m not that great of a poet haha, but I will try my best.
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Contact me @ sujanaryal000@gmail.com okay?? 😀 I’ll be waiting
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